June 4th, 2005
|broadwaydiva111||06:40 am - Application|
Name: Alicia Sprang
Appearance: Alicia is about 5'2 with a slim, but toned and healthy looking, build. She has brown hair, beautiful hazel eyes, and a tanned complexion. She tend to dress in muggle clothing on her days off, typically very preppy clothes, including skirts and tank tops.
Basic Personality: Alicia is fun to be around, but tends to take a lot seriously. She is very flirtatious, but if she is with someone she tends to quiet down a bit. Her major flaw is that she has a bad past that noone knows about, so she has a hard time letting people into her life. Other than that, she's a fun person, and loves hanging around with her classmates.
Quick History: Alicia is a pureblood European witch who transferred to Hogwarts after some trouble (her bad past) at Beauxbatons. Her parents are two of the most prominent magical people in America, owning the wizarding bank over there.
Qudditch?: Loves to watch, not to play
Dating/Crush: Alicia loves boys, but has a hard time trusting them. She does want a boyfriend, but is afrait (again, bad past).
Pets: She has a beautiful pet owl named Hoot, that she named when she was about 5.
Talents: Shes really smart, and really athletic, though she doesn't play quidditch.
Interests: She likes to write, flirt, hang out with her friends. She also loves clothes.
Basic/General mood: Shes usually very fun and happy.
Friends?: No one really knows her yet. She just transferred from America, but shes very daring and will talk to anyone at least once.
Other: Alicia's bad past will come out later, probably with a guy.
Your name (what you want to be known by): Aimee
Your age (optional): 15 (16 during the summer)
Your time zone: eastern
Anything else?: Ummm, I made Alicia a lot like me, but with quirks (like what her bad past will be) and her looks and stuff.
Thanks for applying to h_05.
The mods are reviewing your application. We should get back to you within the next 48 hours.
Do you have a PB in mid for if you are accepted, if not, I can find you one/make you icons if you are accepted.
No, I didn't have one in mind, and if your willing can you? thanks a mill!
Summer and I have decided to accept you if you can adjust some of your character's traits.
First off we really like the "bad past" and we're sure that whatever it is, it will make for some interesting subplots but could you please not make her an American transfer student. It's very Mary Sue-ish. I would prefer if she wasn't a transfer student at all and had been at Hogwarts since first year but it would be all right if transferred from another European school. I recommend Beauxbatons.
Also, they might have been typos but there were a few spelling errors in your application. Could you please use spell check when you make posts. Believe me, I'm the worst speller on Earth and the only way I manage to survive at all is through spellchecker :)
Also (and most importantly) please please please make a journal for your character. I can't accept you with your own journal.
Other then that, we'd be happy to have you. If you are all right with those requirements, then could you please edit your post and join hogwarts_05 with your character's new screen name. Thank you.
This is my journal (obviously). Sorry about the spelling errors. I am usually a lot more careful. I think it was my SAT prep (which is over, thank G-d) that had me not paying attention.
Should I just start posting?
Oh, and thank you!
I'll use the third lacie Chabert one. Thank you!
Do you need any more of her?
No, thats alright. If I end up changing it later I can find one. Thanks anyway!
I can't start posting yet. I need to be added to the main community.
Oh, okay. I'll email Shenala about that.